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Tom and Jeremy - Chapter 6, page 11

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    He's gonna tell Ravi to leave then he is gonna tell us to leave cause the sex scene won't be posted here.

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  • Those two are not ready for a relationship, let alone with each other.

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  • dragonan said:
    Those two are not ready for a relationship, let alone with each other.

    I am going to need some context here.

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  • jay_kuroka said:
    I am going to need some context here.

    I'm guessing that by context you mean what prompted me to say what I said. I've been following this comic for a while and there's just so much about the relationship between Tom and Jeremy that makes me think it's a terrible idea for both of them.

    Both of them are insanely oblivious to really basic stuff. Neither of them is able to communicate properly with the other. They've known each other for three or four days and Jeremy has already lost his shit at Tom three times. He seriously needs to develop some emotional stability before attempting a serious relationship.

    They barely know anything about each other either, they basically think the other is cute/hot and want to bang. It's an understandable feeling, and one that is the impetus for many a relationship, but you would usually expect the dynamic to start from lust and then develop into the characters discovering they have a lot in common and click together in a way that makes them good partners. Tom and Jeremy are basically diametrically opposite to each other and haven't shown any sort of commonality that would suggest they can connect in more than a very superficial way. In fact, when Jeremy suggested they go visit some interesting places, Tom shut that idea down repeatedly to have sex with him. When Jeremy tried talking with Tom later to get to know him better, Tom just told him some very surface-level details (fucks Parker, went to juvie, went to jail), and when Jeremy was shocked, instead of trying to understand why it distressed him, he just went straight to sex again. And Jeremy also showed he was completely uninterested in learning more about Tom's experiences in dealing with jail, or why he ended there, or how it impacted him. He just crossed his arms and pouted, basically. They just don't feel interested in each other's life.

    Now I don't really demand a deep delve into characters' psyches in my porn comics. Obviously things will be glossed over, awkward situations will be smoothed out, glaring issues will be handwaved. However, if the characters are as volatile towards each other as those two are, I would expect the focus of the comic to at least be about them learning to communicate better. Seriously, I cannot a romantic porn comic I have read where the characters in the relationship are as dysfunctional as those two, especially with the way Jeremy loses his shit at Tom because Tom doesn't seem to ever explain anything. We're six chapters in, and Tom is still doing things that look really bad without explanation (storming off when his partner is uncomfortable with the environment he's in) and Jeremy is still jumping to conclusions and screaming at him instead of asking something as basic as "hey, where are you going?/what are you doing?". They both need to develop some basic critical thinking and communication skills before jumping in a serious relationship, least of all one as potentially explosive as this one.

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